Room for Doubt

Room for Doubt
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Posted by:
shelagh ^Ž

10/21/2005, 10:03:55
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A familiar but forgotten room

you visit in dreams. Here it is,

that door into a whole section of your own

house. Of course! How could I

forget?

You walk in. A shiny floor,

transparent curtains billowing

in the fresh breeze from an open

window, and beyond, trees

seen from a new angle.

All is in balance again--clean--

your universe expanded, whole

for a while. Always

leave room for doubt in your mind.

Don't close any doors, or lock and bar sections of your life

away. You are free

to wake, or walk, or

dream.

Cheers everyone!

Shelagh

Replies to this message

Lovely poem, Shelagh --- JHB ( Sat, Oct 22, 2005, 01:52:56 ) ( 408 bytes ) +1

Thanks, John! nt (no text) --- shelagh ( Sat, Oct 22, 2005, 10:20:21 ) ( 0 bytes )

That made something clear to me --- Neville B ( Sat, Oct 22, 2005, 04:12:55 ) ( 271 bytes ) +1

commandments --- 13 ( Sat, Oct 22, 2005, 04:25:17 ) ( 129 bytes ) +3

Re: commandments --- JHB ( Sat, Oct 22, 2005, 04:35:26 ) ( 305 bytes ) +1

Re: commandments --- 13 ( Sat, Oct 22, 2005, 04:48:15 ) ( 467 bytes ) +1

Yeah, I doubt M put more than thirty seconds of thought into that list (no text) --- Neville B ( Sat, Oct 22, 2005, 08:01:29 ) ( 0 bytes )

All five commandments --- Steve ( Sat, Oct 22, 2005, 09:26:36 ) ( 383 bytes ) link +1

Then came the "promises" --- shelagh ( Sat, Oct 22, 2005, 10:24:28 ) ( 162 bytes )

Don't "commandments" give a religious tone anyway? --- Toby ( Sat, Oct 22, 2005, 12:32:01 ) ( 112 bytes )

Re: Room for Doubt --- gregg ( Sun, Oct 23, 2005, 19:19:52 ) ( 1740 bytes )